http://english.dttk.net/2023/04/my-rug/ Reading and Writing in English Fri, 21 Apr 2023 04:06:42 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9 http://english.dttk.net/2023/04/my-rug/#comment-2 Fri, 21 Apr 2023 04:06:42 +0000 http://english.dttk.net/?p=135#comment-2 “well, for a carpet, which commonly have Persian designs”: You mixed your numbers here—a carpet should be matched with “has”. I think what you want to say is “carpets commonly have Persian designs”. Keep it simple.
I thought it was a good piece. You managed to put in a lot of details and the story kept moving and that “toe” ending was unexpected and added colour. Good job!

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